Throughout the grand scheme of things you actually get a B- for effort and hard work. Exactly where you actually lost everybody was first in all the particulars. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more correct here. Having said that, let me inform you precisely what did work. Your writing is definitely highly persuasive which is probably why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can certainly see a jumps in logic you come up with, I am definitely not confident of exactly how you appear to connect your ideas which make the actual final result. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your point however wish in the near future you actually connect the dots much better.