Throughout this excellent design of things you'll get a B- just for hard work. Where you confused me was first on your particulars. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more true here. Having said that, allow me reveal to you what exactly did do the job. Your text can be very persuasive which is possibly why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, even though I can easily notice the leaps in reasoning you make, I am not really sure of just how you seem to connect the points which inturn produce the actual conclusion. For now I will yield to your issue but hope in the foreseeable future you link the dots better.