In this great design of things you'll secure an A with regard to effort. Where you actually confused me was first in your specifics. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more accurate in this article. Having said that, let me tell you just what exactly did do the job. The article (parts of it) can be rather persuasive which is possibly the reason why I am making the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can notice the jumps in reason you make, I am not really sure of exactly how you seem to connect your points which in turn help to make the conclusion. For right now I will yield to your point however hope in the near future you actually connect your dots better.