Throughout the great scheme of things you receive an A+ just for effort. Where you lost me personally was first in all the specifics. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more accurate here. Having said that, let me say to you what exactly did give good results. Your writing can be incredibly persuasive and that is probably the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, whilst I can see a jumps in logic you make, I am not certain of just how you seem to connect the points which inturn produce the actual conclusion. For right now I shall yield to your issue however trust in the near future you actually connect your facts better.