In this wonderful design of things you receive a B+ just for hard work. Exactly where you actually lost us ended up being on all the specifics. You know, they say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, let me inform you what did work. The article (parts of it) is definitely pretty engaging and this is most likely the reason why I am taking an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, although I can notice the leaps in reasoning you make, I am not sure of how you seem to connect the ideas which inturn produce the actual final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your position but trust in the near future you connect the facts better.