In this wonderful pattern of things you receive an A+ for effort. Where you lost everybody was on your particulars. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And that could not be much more accurate here. Having said that, permit me inform you precisely what did work. The article (parts of it) can be highly persuasive and this is probably why I am taking an effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can certainly see the jumps in reason you make, I am not really confident of exactly how you seem to connect your details which help to make the actual final result. For now I will subscribe to your position however hope in the foreseeable future you actually link your facts better.