Throughout the great design of things you'll receive a B+ with regard to hard work. Where you lost everybody ended up being on all the details. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, allow me reveal to you what did work. The text is very engaging and that is probably the reason why I am taking the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can certainly notice a leaps in reasoning you make, I am definitely not sure of how you appear to unite your ideas which in turn produce the conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your point but trust in the near future you link your facts much better.