Throughout this awesome scheme of things you actually receive an A+ just for effort and hard work. Exactly where you actually lost me was on your specifics. You know, they say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more correct at this point. Having said that, permit me say to you precisely what did deliver the results. Your authoring is definitely really engaging and this is probably the reason why I am making an effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, while I can certainly notice a jumps in logic you make, I am not really confident of exactly how you appear to connect the details that make the final result. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but hope in the future you link the dots better.