In the great scheme of things you'll get a B+ for effort and hard work. Where you lost everybody ended up being in the particulars. As it is said, the devil is in the details... And it couldn't be much more correct here. Having said that, allow me say to you what exactly did work. The text is certainly highly persuasive and that is most likely the reason why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can notice the jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am definitely not confident of how you appear to unite the details which in turn help to make the actual conclusion. For now I shall subscribe to your position however hope in the future you link the facts better.