In this great pattern of things you actually get a B- for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost everybody was in the details. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be much more accurate right here. Having said that, allow me say to you just what did give good results. Your writing is certainly quite powerful and this is possibly the reason why I am making the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, despite the fact that I can notice the jumps in reasoning you make, I am definitely not certain of how you appear to unite the details which inturn produce the actual conclusion. For now I shall yield to your position however trust in the near future you link the dots better.