Throughout this great scheme of things you receive a B+ for hard work. Where exactly you confused everybody ended up being on your particulars. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more correct here. Having said that, permit me say to you what exactly did deliver the results. The article (parts of it) can be really persuasive which is probably the reason why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, even though I can certainly notice a leaps in logic you make, I am not sure of just how you seem to unite your points which in turn make the conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your point however trust in the near future you actually link your dots much better.