Throughout this awesome scheme of things you receive a B- just for effort. Where exactly you actually lost me ended up being on the details. As as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more true right here. Having said that, allow me reveal to you what exactly did give good results. The writing is definitely quite powerful and this is most likely the reason why I am taking the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, whilst I can notice the leaps in reason you come up with, I am not really confident of how you seem to unite your points which inturn produce the actual final result. For now I shall yield to your issue but trust in the future you actually link the dots better.