In the grand pattern of things you actually get a B- for effort and hard work. Exactly where you lost us ended up being on the facts. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more accurate at this point. Having said that, permit me say to you just what exactly did give good results. Your article (parts of it) is really engaging which is most likely the reason why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, even though I can certainly see a jumps in logic you make, I am definitely not certain of exactly how you appear to connect the ideas which in turn produce the actual final result. For right now I will subscribe to your issue however wish in the near future you connect the facts much better.