Throughout the grand pattern of things you actually get a B- with regard to effort and hard work. Where you actually misplaced everybody was on all the details. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more true in this article. Having said that, let me say to you just what exactly did deliver the results. Your article (parts of it) is definitely pretty persuasive and this is probably the reason why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can easily see a leaps in logic you come up with, I am not confident of just how you seem to connect your details which inturn make the conclusion. For right now I shall yield to your position but hope in the near future you link the dots much better.