In this wonderful pattern of things you actually receive a B+ with regard to hard work. Where exactly you misplaced us was in the specifics. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be more accurate at this point. Having said that, permit me say to you what exactly did work. The article (parts of it) is incredibly powerful which is possibly the reason why I am making the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can see the jumps in reason you come up with, I am not necessarily sure of exactly how you appear to unite your details which help to make the actual final result. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your issue but wish in the future you link the dots better.