In this awesome scheme of things you receive a B- just for effort. Where you lost me personally ended up being on all the specifics. You know, people say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more true here. Having said that, permit me reveal to you exactly what did give good results. Your authoring is actually quite powerful and this is most likely the reason why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, whilst I can notice a leaps in reasoning you come up with, I am not necessarily convinced of exactly how you appear to unite the ideas which produce the conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt subscribe to your position but trust in the future you actually link your facts better.