In the excellent scheme of things you actually receive an A+ just for effort and hard work. Exactly where you lost me personally was on all the details. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more correct in this article. Having said that, allow me tell you just what did deliver the results. The writing is pretty engaging and that is most likely the reason why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, even though I can easily notice a jumps in logic you come up with, I am not really sure of exactly how you seem to unite the ideas which inturn help to make your conclusion. For now I shall subscribe to your position but hope in the near future you connect your facts much better.