Throughout the great scheme of things you secure a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually confused everybody ended up being on all the specifics. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more correct here. Having said that, permit me inform you just what exactly did give good results. Your article (parts of it) can be highly persuasive and this is possibly why I am making the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can easily notice a jumps in reason you make, I am definitely not certain of how you seem to unite the points which in turn make the actual conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but trust in the future you connect the dots much better.