In the grand scheme of things you get a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually misplaced everybody was on the specifics. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more accurate here. Having said that, permit me say to you exactly what did give good results. The writing can be incredibly convincing which is most likely why I am making the effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can certainly see the jumps in reason you come up with, I am not necessarily convinced of how you appear to connect the points that help to make the conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your point however wish in the near future you actually connect your dots much better.