In the great design of things you actually secure a B- for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually confused everybody ended up being in the specifics. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be more correct in this article. Having said that, let me tell you what exactly did give good results. Your article (parts of it) can be very engaging and that is probably the reason why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can easily notice the jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am not really certain of exactly how you seem to connect the points which make your final result. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your issue but trust in the foreseeable future you connect the dots much better.