Throughout the awesome scheme of things you actually receive a B+ for effort. Where exactly you lost everybody ended up being in your specifics. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, let me say to you exactly what did work. The text can be quite powerful which is probably why I am making an effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, even though I can easily see a jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am not really confident of just how you appear to connect your details which inturn produce the final result. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your point however wish in the near future you actually connect your dots much better.