In this wonderful pattern of things you'll receive a B- just for effort. Exactly where you actually confused us ended up being in the facts. As they say, the devil is in the details... And that could not be more true here. Having said that, let me inform you just what exactly did do the job. The writing can be extremely powerful which is probably why I am taking an effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can easily notice the jumps in reason you make, I am definitely not certain of how you appear to unite your points which in turn help to make the final result. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue however wish in the foreseeable future you actually link your facts better.